Here's my main character introduction I like it so far but may change feel free to leave any suggestions!!
Luke is the typical average Joe. Just in his 30's Luke seem to be planning his life they way he always wanted it to had a beautiful wife and a little girl. Luke was a architecture, or a construction which made him a very good living, and was also an ex- marine. After doing his morning exercise routine every morning Luke would make breakfast for his wife and daughter and pack her a lunch for school. By the time Luke had gotten all his morning chores done, he always fine time to go to church and thank God for the wonderful he has. Luke isn't a very fearful man only to not be able to protect his family if he would ever need to.
On the weekends Luke goes to the local YMCA to play pick up games of basketball with his friends from work and plays against other people of his community. All his friends like him, he's a good teamplayer always trying to help make somone better, always viewing him has loyal and someone they can count on. However the next day Luke's life would about to change forever....
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ReplyDeleteIt seems like you really thought Luke through, his likes and dislikes and daily habits. He sounds like an all-around good guy. If I had a suggestion would be to think about what his faults are.
ReplyDeleteI have a good sense of Joe's character but that's about it. I think you could easily weave some physical descriptions in there. I see that there will be a problem tomorrow. It might be nice to have a hint. Is it going to be danger, sorrow, money, good news, death, whatever. Just an idea of the struggle of the story. Finally, I would recommend reading every sentence by itself and making sure it makes sense and that the words all agree with each other. Good Luck. I hope this helps.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments.This character just a rough draft and will use the comments for suggestions.
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice overview of this character, Alex -- but not really a scene! How might you show this person in action, and let us learn about him that way? (This week's exercises will help answer that!)
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