Saturday, June 27, 2009

Exercise 89

Exercise 89

I have to say this exercise really helped me in making my story add a bit more detail and opening up the plot a little better. When I was writing my first draft I noticed that I had mostly summarized what the main character was looking at instead of giving the scene more detail and giving the reader something to visualize.

After doing this particular exercise I notice that my scenes in the story were becoming more realistic and interesting to read. The exercise on page 225 also gave me a chance to do add some more dialogue to my story which also gave it more detail.

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